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Reviewer: Quellefromage Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 08, 2023 8:50 am Title: Chapter 1

What a lovely story, perfect tone, great characterizations. I'm glad I got to read it, and happy that your legend continues on.

Reviewer: SBerry Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2022 10:39 am Title: Chapter 1

What a sweet story. I loved how you set it during the poker game. It was fun to see them some place other than work or the bar. The dialog between Paul and Peter was right on target...and Paul was just the right combo of gruff police captain and concerned father. Definitely a keeper!

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